New Artwork : Illustrated Poems.

[Keeper]

My sister just uploaded a couple of illustrated poems to deviant art and asked me to let people know.

http://guhfloyd.deviantart.com

She'd appreciate any feedback you have, and if she gets some replies to this post, she has promised to register an account with the Custom Hobby Forum :D

[Custom_Hobby]

I liked them, the one about the pea and bean made me smile (I needed that).

[Guhfloyd]

Well I said I would join so here I am now, a Dragon egg. I'm glad I made you smile anyway, my next mission is to figure out who/what/why Cheddarmonger is.
Also, nice forum - the friendliest I've seen in a long while :)

[Custom_Hobby]

Thank you and  :welcome: to our little home on the net

[Perv]

Very good, 28 or so to go and you've got yaself a book for publishing  :icon_w00t:

[gi6ers]

Bryony's panda's is very good, nice rhythmn to it - but I'm not sure if you mean devoid or void..?

Bean and Pea is a nice idea and I like the story but the rhyme of Walk and Dark takes me out of the poem, I don't think it flows as well as the Panda poem.

Welcome aboard  :welcome:

[Bodhi]

Panda's clearly my favourite to. But I'm a real sucker for Lewis Carrol styled nonsense rhymes me  :)

Illustrations are great for both of them. I like the simplicity and nice expressions on bean and pea.
Welcome!

[Guhfloyd]

Thanks for the welcomes and the feedback. The poetry is new for me so it's great to have people comment on it.

I think 'devoid' would have been a more accurate word to use than 'void' but 'void' fits the rhythm of the poem and I don't think it's inaccurate (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/void(-adjective[3]) - although I'm unsure about how reliable this dictionary is).

Reading my writing through in a standard English accent is something I should do - 'walk' & 'dark' rhyme when your accent is broad Yorkshire ;)

[Custom_Hobby]

I use that online dictionary all the time. It is a good one.